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PostSubject: Torn Between Two (first Two Chapters)   Torn Between Two (first Two Chapters) EmptyWed Jul 22, 2009 11:02 am

I apologise for the crapiness of the grammer and spelling.
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Chapter One-


Lily read over the letter two more times to make sure she had read it right. Head Girl? She squeled loudly bring her friends Charlie and Annabelle running, they had been making sure they had packed everything.

“Lily? What’s up?” Charlie asked scanning the letter over Lily’s head.

“Head girl. Amazing.” She breathed.

“What?” Anna asked. Lily passed her the letter. “Woah. Head girl. What you’ve always wanted.”

Lily grinned but her smile faltered as she look closely to the end of the letter.

You will be pleasedto know, that James Potter has been made Head Boy.

Charlie looked at her concern in her eyes, she followed Lily’s sight to the bottom of the letter.

“Well that puts a damper of things.” She muttered.

“What does?” Anna asked. “Lee what does?”

“Potter is Head Boy.”

“Potter!?...but how the hell could Potter become Head Boy? He is about as responsible as a chocolate frog.” This made Lily laugh.

“I guess I’ll live.” She smiled weakly. Anna nodded and went back to packing.

“Lily, have you heard from Snape latly?” She asked tentivly.

“No.” Lily sighed. They hadn’t talked since the end of fifth year when he had called her a Mudblood. They hadn’t talked for a whole year.

“I think you should write to him.” Charlie said. Lily liked Charlie for this reason, She didn’t exactly like Severus but unlike Anna she didn’t hate him and if he made Lily happy who was she to get in the way.

“What if he doesn’t want to talk?” Lily asked folding the letter in her hands and placing it in her pocket. She had a strange feeling she was missing something until she felt the envelope. A small badge was sitting in the corner. Taking it out she looked at it. It had the Hogwarts creast with the letters HG on top.

“Lily you might as well try to make up with him you don’t want to keep hating him for the rest of your life, do you?”

“I never planned too, but I’m not sure if I want to make up yet. And anyway he’s the one who should be saying sorry to me, he called me a...you know...”

“He did say sorry if a recall.” Charlie said turning around to go finish packing. “Just think about it.”

“I will Lee, ok?” Lily sighed and sat down on a chair. She would be returning to Hogwarts the next day her last year. The year hadn’t started but it was already complicated enough. Potter head boy. Who in the world would make a Maruder Head Boy let alone Potter. Anna was right he was as responsible as a chocolate frog. Her mind shifted from Potter to Sev. She still wasn’t sure if she was ready to make up. But if she didn’t do it this year would she ever? She doubted it. Maybe she would try and set things right. But really he was the one who should be apologising. Not me. Lily thought.



Chapter Two-



Come on girls.” Mr Evans’ voice shouted up the stairs. Lily, Charlie and Anna grabbed their trunks and pulled them down the stairs. It was ten o’clock so they had an hour to get to Kings Cross. Once everyone was sitting in the car and everything was packed they pulled out of the driveway and off to the station. The girls talking animatly the whole trip. They were both excited and sad it was their last year. Imagine leaving at the end of the year and not coming back. Well they had one more year to enjoy it. They were going to make the most of it. The car stopped and the girls got out and grabbed their trunks.

“Bye Lily.” Mr. Evans said hugging her. “Don’t forget to write.”

“I won’t, cya Dad.” She smiled.

“Bye Mr. Evans.” Charlie and Anna said.

“Bye girls.”

The girls set off to the station laughing and talking. They stopped at the barrier to platform 9 ¾ and nodded, Lily set off first running through the wall Charlie and Anna followed.

“You need to go somewhere don’t you?” Anna said as they walked towards the train. Lily nodded. Professor McGonagall wants to meet the Head Girl and Boy.” She made a face. “Hopefully it won’t take long and I can come sit with you later.” Anna and Charlie nodded; they all walked onto the train, Charlie and Anna going to find a spare compartment. Lily off to compartment A where McGonagall and Potter would be. She sighed pulling her trunk along the train. It started to move and Lily looked through a window as she passed a compartment the station was barely visible. She made it to A and opened the door seeing that Potter was already there but no McGonagall.

“Hello Evans.” He said brightly. Lily made a face and shut the door behind her sitting down as far away from Potter as she could. Potter was in a joyful mood humming happily. Lily sighed, why had Potter become Head Boy? He was the most ignorant boy in this world. The whole of Hogwarts couldn’t hold his ego. He never did any work all he did was muck around, play pranks, annoy Sev and ask her out every five minutes. He had no use in this world at all.

“Hey Evans-“ Potter started probably to ask her out when he was interrupted.

“Potter, Evans. Thanks for coming.” Lily turned to see McGonagall. “This hopefully won’t take long.” She sat down on the opposite side to Lily. “Potter could you possibly move any closer?” Potter beamed and sat down next to Lily. “Ok. You will be making weekly reports to the Headmaster. Also you will alternate in taking rounds around the school making sure everyone is in bed by curfew. We are also thinking of starting a defence against the dark arts club. If this does happen you will be asked to supervise it. You will also be given certain other jobs to do. You have your own room in your dorm if you wish to use it. You don’t need to of course.” She handed them both a key. “You can get to it at the end of the corridors in which the dorms are. The key doesn’t work to the other dorm. There is also a room on the third floor next to the statue of Alfred the Great. The password is Witchcraft and Wizardry.” She breathed and a smile appeared on her face. “Both the Head Master and staff think you will make a great Head Boy and Girl. You can go and sit with your friends now if you want.” She said. Lily quickly got up and placed the small silver key in her pocket. She grabbed her trunk leaving the compartment quickly.

“Evans.” Potter shouted.

Lily scowled and turned around. “What do you want Potter?”

“Congratulations.” He said.

“Are you trying to flatter me into going out with you?” Lily asked turning around and walking back down the train. No-one was out in the corridor.

Potter smiled cockily, “That was only half the plan. But no seriously congrats.” Lily ignored him wondering where Anna and Charlie had gone. She walked pass the corridors looking in each one until she found the one that they were in.

“How was it?” Anna asked once Lily had sat down after placing her trunk above on the rack. Lily shrugged.

“It was alright.” She sighed. Anna and Charlie knew better then to keep talking about that subject.

They sat in the silence for the majority of the train ride home as they had talked about everything in the week they had stayed at Lily’s that there wasn’t that much left to talk about. Lily stared out the window watching the train rumbled through the empty country side. It was a murky day, the sky the colour of dishwater the clouds like the frothy bubbles. Lily sighed; she had always wanted to be head girl now Potter came along and ruined it for her. It was unbelievably frustrating. Why had Dumbledore chosen to make a Marauder Head Boy? And Potter no less. If you were going to chose a marauder chose Remus Lupin he at least payed attention in class and got good marks. Potter was the most ignorant of the four but not the worst choice that would be Peter, he was just a tag along. Of no real use to the other three as far as Lily could tell he wasn’t even as close to the others as they were to each other. Potter and Black were closer then Lily had ever seen boys be and Remus wasn’t far behind. The train pulled into the platform and Lily sighed getting her trunk. Time for her last beginning feast.


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