Regulus Black (A Poem)

I will die tonight.
And I know that
It won't make things right
For those gone and dead
But to save someone else
I give my life instead.
For this is my last effort,
My one and only shot.
To bring down the Dark Lord,
I'm giving everything I got.
Cause I have spent my whole life living,
Believing in the wrong.
You taught me this "was not right",
Maybe I knew that all along.
I was never a proper Black,
Nothing like my mother.
The more I think,
The more I see,
I'm a lot like my brother.
And he'll be the one to grab you,
To snag you, in the end.
I hate this more than I hate the fact,
I'll never make amends.
I am crossing my fingers,
Hoping, at least, your life ends well.
Because tonight, dear friends,
I, Regulus Black,
am going down to Hell.

(Lately, I have been shipping Regulus with Remus.)

ohmigod.
that is ownage.
seriously.
that killed me.
genius.

August.

I love you.

Regulus/Remus isn't my OTP as everyone knows, but I do lovelovelove it to bits because Gay!Regulus is sooooooo canon to me.


Now, then, proper review:

I like the nonconventional use of rhyme. It helps to tie things into each other without making it follow any sort of rules, so thumbs up for that.
It also combines equal parts "My heart, it hurts, what is this feeling?" and "Total fucking badass" which is hard to do.

basically, ilovethissohardcore.

0_0 that as totally awesome. *nomz the poem skillz*

Ooh, very nice.